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*stunned silence* I can't believe I've finally finished writing this....
I hope you've enjoyed reading this story of mine! There's a lot going on in this last part!
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Posted by Crazyserpent 8 years ago Report
This chapter was so heartfelt that I cried! I'm also sad that this amazing fic is now over.
I was not expecting unbirth and while I'm not a huge fan of it, I think it worked really well in this story.
Loved the attitude of Quetzalcoatl's mother. Very sassy!
Posted by Crazyserpent 8 years ago Report
Also I give this fic a 10 out of 10. Bravo! *claps hands*
Posted by SBisME 8 years ago Report
*takes a bow* thank you! Thank you! I'm so glad you were moved to tears and enjoyed it. I am really, super appreciative for you comments and encouragement!
Posted by divineBeast 8 years ago Report
oh wow so good! perfect ending!
the image i have of a crying little salamander is so cute and sad i want to hold him and tell him everything will be okay lol!
Posted by SBisME 8 years ago Report
Right???? I'm totally going to try and draw it! Thank you! :)
Posted by SBisME 8 years ago Report
Aaaand, I drew it:
http://shido-burrito.deviantart.com/art/Xolotl-Cry-671270404?ga_submit_new=10%3A1490571974&ga_type=edit&ga_changes=1&ga_recent=1
Posted by divineBeast 8 years ago Report
das cuuute!!!!
Posted by Crazyserpent 8 years ago Report
Omg that's adorable! <3 And his name fits perfectly!
Posted by ethan3369 8 years ago Report
They forgot to see etalpalli after they weere done.
Posted by ethan3369 8 years ago Report
Also would they still visit vilage for solstace and day of prayers and day of sacrifice?
Posted by SBisME 8 years ago Report
Probably not. The village had those holidays because Quetzalcoatl was there (trapped) in their village to make him answer their prayers. It might take a few decades before Quetz feels like visiting that awful place again. Also, the pyramid needs some repair after Tlaloc and Tezcatlipoca trashed it a little. Oops.
Posted by SBisME 8 years ago Report
Argh! You're right! I'm sure they eventually went to go visit. Hm, I wonder how she would react to Xolotl becoming a god... XP
Posted by ethan3369 8 years ago Report
That was my first thought along with the impling quetz is now a god and wasnt before.